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Post by Hanson Crawford on Sept 21, 2005 21:39:31 GMT -5
I have never seen the people of this forum so united! Usually we're at each others throats, but you, LA, have united us all in our hatred for you! Even Whittaker doesn't like you anymore and he's like the most accepting one! But you've probably been waiting for this question since you started here, so tell us, what is you 'oh, so important' story? Also, newbies would do well not to insult the intelligence of older players. It's bad public relations. And no one likes you anyway.
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Post by Rune on Sept 21, 2005 21:57:35 GMT -5
Oh, we like him, we'd just like to express it in a way that involves ripping out his aeorta. What, don't think you can do that? Let me ask you this: are you a doctor? No? Fine, then, I say again... ripping out his aeorta.
But yes, Lo. Ass., you seem to be our very own personal Saddam Hussein. You act like a dictator, and all of the crazy Americans who are delusional and selfish decide that, for just a moment, we're not going to be that way until we've destroyed you.
Btw, they found him, you know. In a hole. With a beard. Don't know why he grew the beard, as if we'd find an Iraqi with such a resemblance to him actually hiding out in a hole near his last known location, and then decide that it was just a coincidence because he had a little chin hair.
Anyways, I say this to you: grow a beard, hide in a hole, curl up in the fetal position, talk to your fecal monster, and wait for our pompous butts to show up and really mess up your life.
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Lone Assassin
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Post by Lone Assassin on Sept 22, 2005 7:22:25 GMT -5
If this looks incomplete, it's because I'm not done.
In breif:
Lone Assassin was born on the 2nd contenent. Both his parents and grandparents died by MASS attacks. So he lived with his great-grandfather. His great-grandfather owned the largest aegisite mine on the 2nd continent, so Lone Assassin had all he wanted, including a backpack full of equipment in case he wanted to go exploring.
One day, a government messenger knokced on the door of the mansion. When the great-grandfather opened the door, the messenger demanded him to give the mine to the government. He quickly refused. When the messenger left, the great-grandfather locked the door and said "follow me". He brought Lone Assassin into the secret basement and told him to get his backpack. When Lone Assassin came back, he saw a huge amount of ninja weapons, equipment, and clothing. He was told to take them and run 78 miles to a personal submarine he had (they had that technology, and he had the money). He said it was easy to operate. Lastly, he gave Lone Assassin a piece of paper. It had the following on it:
"The treasure's riddle-The answer lies in the head and the heart of the MASS"
The great-grandfather hugged Lone Assassin and said "Find allies grow in power,then come back and solve the riddle." Then he sent him off. Lone Assassin never saw him again.
The journey took 6 days, to complete. Some where on the way, he went to sleep and dreamed. In his dream, all he heard was "Lone Assassin,Lone Assassin,MURDERER" When he woke up, he didn't remember his own name. All he could think of was the dream. So he named himself Lone Assassin.
When he arrived at the submarine, he set it to go to the first continent. The journey was an uneventful one. But he knew that even if the government knew he existed,they were too far away to do anyything about it now. When he arrived at the 1st continent, He had three missions in mind: find allies, grow in power, and avenge his great-grandfather by findung the treasure.
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Post by Whitakker on Sept 22, 2005 17:15:27 GMT -5
You know what, forget it. My respect for you has now dissolved entirely. Don't even mention my name in your story. I don't want to be associated with a pompous oaf who has to use very piecemeal colloquialisms to make himself sound like he knows what he's talking about. It really sickens me. To quote a wise man, "Arrogance mixed with ignorance will and can bring forth the man that doesn't really understand, but claims he does." Arrogance and Ignorance are two things you possess in copious amounts, LA. Now, go die in a hole and leave us.
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Rune
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Post by Rune on Sept 22, 2005 17:38:59 GMT -5
No, no, don't die in a hole. Just lock yourself in that little room with no windows, no doors, and those nice, padded walls. ;D
--EDIT-- Or, on second thought, feel free to jump into a hole. Just don't forget to grow that beard first... but, wait, that means you'll have to hit puberty first, so we'll give it about nine years and then make you hide out in a hole!
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Post by Hanson Crawford on Sept 22, 2005 18:39:36 GMT -5
There are so many faults in your story I don't know where to begin.... ;D
You're probably not aware of this, but there are huge storms and underwater currents in the ocean between the two continents! I doubt a twelve year old with no knowledge of submarines could do it no matter how easy it was to operate!
Also, when did you get the 'super' injection or whatever that makes you super strong? I doubt a great father would allow it to be done. And don't even try to say it happens to everyone. Because my character also originated on Neo Nexus.
Do you even know how far 78 miles is? He would have died. End of story. Especially since you say nothing about him getting any food or water.
And two things in your story contradict Neo Nexus directly. His parents and grandparents couldnt have died of MASS attacks. There are no MASS on the northern half of the Great Divide. And no one lives on the southern side because thats swarming with MASS. Meaning they wouldn't be anywhere near the MASS. And don't say they climbed over the Great Divide to defend your story. To find out how high and how barricaded the Great Divide is, check the Compilation. If a swarm of MASS can't do it, your character's relatives sure can't. Secondly: His great grandfather owns an aegistite mine? There is no aegistite on the second continent. If there were, Neo Nexus might not be so doomed. And Neo Nexus is quite doomed.
Again. Read the Compilation.
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Post by Thanatos on Sept 22, 2005 19:42:21 GMT -5
Hanson, despite all the times I've become overly aggrevated with your off-the-rocker ideas and sheer determination to see them implemented, I have to say you've earned both my respect and utmost gratitude with your last post. You've handled things perfectly, and proved you have a better working knowledge of the Compilation than even I do.
One small thing: Aegisite is present on the Second Continent, but it's hoarded and a ridiculously valuable commodity. That may or may not be in the Compilation--please forgive me if I neglected to include it.
Great work, Hanson.
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Rune
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Post by Rune on Sept 22, 2005 20:18:31 GMT -5
Funny, Thanatos had an oppurtunity to put an end to all of this bashing and bring peace, but, instead, he just agreed with Hanson.
Know what that means? God is smiting your butt.
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Dimitri
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Post by Dimitri on Sept 22, 2005 20:19:52 GMT -5
LA, Our system may have it's flaws, but it still works. It's become quite tried true, so don't be thick-as-a-brick and try to change it.
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Post by Whitakker on Sept 22, 2005 20:34:37 GMT -5
You know you've been dissed when the resident songwriter puts you down.
Personally, I just want you to leave now, LA.
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Lone Assassin
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Post by Lone Assassin on Sept 22, 2005 20:40:07 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]NOW[/glow] I will consent, for my story has been told and now it is fact (not just you guys harassing me) that my plot has faults. Therefore you can delete this thread and try to find it in your hearts yo forgive me. You see, since only Warden knew my story, it seemed unfair to accuse mine with no knowledge. After some time, it just became a verbal slug fest, so I was rather frustrated.
By the way whittaker, I possess ego not arrogance, creativity not ignorance.
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Rune
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Post by Rune on Sept 22, 2005 20:50:51 GMT -5
First of all... please don't delete this thread. It is the first sign of unity we've ever had at this site. Plus, it's freakin' hilarious.
Second of all, we weren't bashing your story beforehand. Well, at least, not to start with. We were bashing the way you were handling... well, everything at this site. And, as far as I know, you have still failed to read the Compilation. Wow. Fecal monster must have infiltrated beyond your ear cavity and into your actual brain, eating away through the little that's there, for you to NOT HAVE READ IT YET.
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Lone Assassin
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Post by Lone Assassin on Sept 22, 2005 20:57:40 GMT -5
Well, to show my sincerity, you can just jump into any of my stories and add some random comment like "I like sausage lol".
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Post by Whitakker on Sept 22, 2005 20:59:03 GMT -5
LA, ignorance is continuing on with what you're doing even when people who know more than you try to help you, and you refuse their help.
And ego isn't necessarily a positive trait in the first place...
I'll say it again: don't use what limited high vocabulary you posess just so you can pretend to look like you know what the heck you're doing. Then, not only will Rune smite you, I will too. And I posess none of the subtlety/tact that he has(if he has any).
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Dimitri
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Post by Dimitri on Sept 22, 2005 21:24:11 GMT -5
My dear wannabe ninja LA, your character is not exactly creative. Cookie cutter ninja characters with special powers have been around longer than you have. Don't confuse the ability to adapt and copy with the ability to be inspired or to create something from nothing. Don't make me go crazy on you. Good day to you, sir.
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