Dimitri
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Listen to the wind blow, Down comes the night. Break the silence, d**n the dark, d**n the light...
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Post by Dimitri on Jul 26, 2005 21:25:14 GMT -5
(mellow, bouncy) I often wonder if The sun is the moon In a pale disguise...
But it's inconsequential to the look in your Beautiful eyes...
(gradually picking up rapid pace) I never expected to fall in love with you...
But now that I have, what can I do...?
You don't know how I feel....
Over my holidays I've grown...
It took a while but I've come into my own...
What I want is you.........
(original pace)
I don't think I've felt so strange Like my mind's been re-arranged I never ever seen a someone so pure, I think I'm exaggerating, I'm quite sure
But I don't care...
(Speeding up again)
I don't know what's going on in my head...
I wish the words could be easily read...
I want you...
I never expected it to hit so soon...
Now my eyes feel like the moon...
And I love you.......
(original)
You're so awfully considerate, Just to talk to me, One day I'll be brave And ask you, you'll see...
One day as were talking At the turn of the page, You'll see that I've Come of age,
For you....
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Post by leiasolo on Jul 27, 2005 16:30:08 GMT -5
You're so creative...And so misunderstood. I commend you, praise you, and encourage you to keep it up, because talent like yours is rare and beautiful.
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Kimato
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the greatest thing you will ever learn is just to love and be loved in return
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Post by Kimato on Jul 28, 2005 8:36:05 GMT -5
An unexpected pleasure! Lol. I really like this, it's classic in the sense that anyone could identify with it, yet quite unique in the sense that I've never read another love song like it. And I've read a LOT of love songs. Keep up the great work, my friend! -Kimato-
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